1. https://youtu.be/P-J0zFWOBrM
2. Unfortunately, I did not receive a ton of feedback from my last pitch, but I did receive some helpful comments. Someone emphasized the importance of eye contact, posture, and composure when giving the speech, which is definitely something I have to constantly remind myself of. It feels a little weird standing in front of a camera talking, so I sometimes struggle with staying completely composed in that situation, and I sometimes even start talking fast or looking away. So, this advice is very helpful and points out things I need to practice doing to be successful.
3. I have definitely tried to improve some things based on the feedback I \received. I focused more on keeping my voice steady and maintaining composure when speaking. I also tried to keep direct eye contact with the camera even though I failed a few times here and there. Furthermore, I tried to make my speech a little more concise and sound more appealing to the audience, so I hope that's the case. Finally, I was able to memorize my pitch more clearly and not mess up as many times.
Hey Brandon!
ReplyDeleteI think your elevator pitch was great! You spoke extremely clearly and explained your product well. You also had a great hook. Attracting the listeners in the beginning is a good way to make sure they'll listen at the end. Your voice was steady and you memorized your pitch. I do suggest though, standing or placing your camera at a better angle so that the audience can see you better, although obviously this wouldn't be an issue when presenting an elevator pitch in real life. Nice job!
Hey Brandon, great job with the improvements! You spoke very clearly and got out all the information that you needed to get out in the short amount of time. The only thing I would say is to include some more movement and hand gestures in order to pique attention from the people you are pitching to. This would add to your pitch by bringing your enthusiasm about your own product and transferring that positive emotion to the person and into another reason why they should buy or invest right now.
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